A man with violent psychopathic
tendencies is drawn to a House of Dimensions in Depression-era Chicago. He becomes
a serial killer who can jump back and forth in time to hunt gifted girls while eluding the authorities. Sounds like a cool concept, which makes it such a tragedy that Beukes stinks as a writer. I’m writing more than I should in expressing how disappointed I was in wasting my time with such mediocrity.
So the plot. The only thing the mysterious House demanded from the killer was an occasional tribute: seek out and murder a young woman who had “the shine” – not the telepathic ability from the Stephen King novel, but a shining talent. The House demanded that these bright stars be snuffed out.
Despite the amount of research devoted to Depression-era Chicago, Beukes was not able to weave it seamlessly into her narrative. I think the fact she’s from South Africa showed how she was an outsider looking in. She was also incapabe of inhabiting her characters completely nor could she write invisibly. As a result, I wasn't able to lose myself in the narrative like I could with Lisa Lutz’s The Passenger, for instance.
Beukes had hit upon a cool sub-genre of supernatural crime thrillers, and because of her intriguing premises, I gave this a second go. My first book of hers was Broken Monsters (2015) - it was also disappointing, but not as much as this one. I found Broken Monsters to be the better book than The Shining Girls, her previous effort.


